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Waiting for an Indication 5/5 
29th-May-2010 07:59 pm
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Brendon wakes up when his phone vibrates across the nightstand and clunks to the floor. Shane groans into Brendon's armpit and flails a little in his sleep.

Brendon yawns widely. "You're old," he tells the top of Shane's head, leaning over the bed to fumble for the phone on the floor. "I'm not jetlagged at--" he has to break off for another jaw-cracking yawn--"at all." He pulls the phone toward him with his fingertips until he can scoop it up and settle back in bed to read the new text from Sarah.

hows hawaii?

Prty, he sends back, looking out the window at the ocean and absently combing through Shane's hair with his fingers. Shn is old. Dsnt want 2 wk up.

He gets a reply a few seconds later. LOL Regan says blow him

He grins and rolls his eyes a little. Grls nite? Dors Day agn?

Hepburn and cosmos and only if u count Ry and Spence as girls

i do if there drnkng csmos

taking the 5th

Brendon laughs, and Shane pinches him. Brendon grabs the punishing fingers, and kisses them when Shane glares. Brendon holds up one finger, gesturing to his phone with his head. Shane sighs and puts his head back down with a soft bite to Brendon's ribs.

not foolin me, Brendon taps out, aware that he's losing interest in the conversation as Shane's knee inches over Brendon's thigh.

but theyre making out so not rly watching the movie

cosmos grlier thn Hpbrn, Brendon argues. Shane is mouthing at his ribcage. It's nice.

u r really critical 4 someone who promised his mom a pic of kissing his boyfriend under a waterfall

cosmos grlier thn wtrfll kss. george of the jngl did a wtrfll kiss nbdy mnlier

george and ursula never kiss under the falls george seduces her with puffy cheeks ttl FTL

Brendon considers this for a moment. He looks down at Shane and puffs out his cheeks like George of the Jungle. Shane raises an eyebrow at him and puffs his own cheeks back. Brendon smiles. they wnt bck n made the bb thr. trst me

smartass. go blow Shane hes wasting hawaii. luv u

u 2, Brendon sends, and sets the phone on the nightstand. Shane looks up at him, smiling sleepily.

Brendon slides down the bed to do as he's told.



Art and Music: Amazing Extras by Big Bang Creators ~*~ Final Notes ~*~ Return to Part One
25th-Jun-2010 04:52 am (UTC)
So I have a tendency to be overly complimentary when commenting on fic that I really enjoy. I want you to know that this comment is not overly complimentary. I am not just saying that I love it because I like it a lot. I am saying that I love it because I love it.

Every character and every perspective felt so real; their feelings were complicated enough that they were practically breathing; the way you wrote the different relationships was incredible. I actually did the whole saving-quotes-to-talk-about-later-in-a-comment thing, which I never do.

"Nothing's perfect, George Ryan Ross, no matter how much you dream."
I think this sums up one of the best characterisations of Ryan: the cynic who doesn't have faith in anything, but is always dreaming and hoping to achieve the ideal.

He's worked so hard to be in love with her; he doesn't want her to be sad.
This is kind of heart breaking. It's brilliant and wonderful, and an aspect of sometimes functional relationships that is rarely addressed.

Especially since I think Brendon's going to put orange juice on his Frosted Flakes again; you know that freaks me out."


Ryan falls down a lot and Jon laughs at him and Ryan communes with the parts of nature he doesn't trip over.

I find hilarious.

Spencer doesn't let himself hate Ian even a little bit, and concentrates on his own breathing at night in the tour bus without Ryan's snores to set his heartbeat to.
I'm not sure why, but the last bit of this is absolutely devastating.

Bun mostly just, oh god, I didn't want this to end. The relationships fit my personal fannon perfectly, at least as far as Ryan and Spencer are involved. In my head, there's plenty of fun and sex between bandmates, and lots of caring, and Ryan and Brendon have some moments, as do Spencer and Brendon, but mostly it's not serious, and all the while, Ryan and Spencer are totally in love with each other and pining and hurting and things.

Also, just fyi, this has kinda inspired me to keep working on ym own fic...and just...I don't know. This really spoke to me, for some reason.

Thank you!
25th-Jun-2010 04:54 am (UTC)
That is truly fabulous to hear, especially in detail and that it inspired you. ^_^ Thank you so, so much.
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